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Let me tell you full a story
About a boy named Vova,
Vova was a funny hero, likes a laugh.
Mother, father are in shock,
Vova smokes and listenes heavy rock,
He is not fourteen and he is fuck.
Mother said he is a problem,
Father read a Vova’s poem
Painted a abusive words at the guitar.
Vova catches to every word,
Vova is a torrid cold,
Vova knows a filthy language, he is a story's star!
About a boy named Vova,
Vova was a funny hero, likes a laugh.
Mother, father are in shock,
Vova smokes and listenes heavy rock,
He is not fourteen and he is fuck.
Mother said he is a problem,
Father read a Vova’s poem
Painted a abusive words at the guitar.
Vova catches to every word,
Vova is a torrid cold,
Vova knows a filthy language, he is a story's star!
Отзывы
Макс Колесник13.02.2015
Ритм плавает, рифмы слабые. Построение предложений с ошибками: вместо глаголов попадаются существительные, члены предложения между собой согласованы не точно, что придает тексту совсем иной смысл, расходящийся с тем, что подразумевается в контексте.
Lightfall15.02.2015
и на этом спасибо...
Лами Соломон22.02.2015
lightfall - beautiful supernova star.
