Молчание

Здесь "уже" применяется не к глаголу "отцветает", а к прилагательному "бледная". Думаю, что это вполне уместно, хотя мне и самой поначалу не нравилось. P.S. По ритмике да, убрать стоит. Перечитала в сотый раз:) спасибо за критику.

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