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Запомни меня

Запомни меня безупречной, красивой и вольной,
Сияние глаз, любовавшихся нашей луной,
Запомни меня сверхъестественно жизнью довольной,
Как в самом начале, доверчивой, нежной, родной.
 
Тогда нам казалось, что наша любовь - бесконечна,
Влюблённым неведома трезвость и ясность ума...
Я стала мудрее, наверно, на целую вечность,
С тех пор, как от нашей любви протрезвела сама.
 
Её, по кусочку, с усталой души изымаю,
И всё же, была самой яркой в свой пик торжества,
Ты спросишь: "А может она просто спит, и живая?"
Нет, нет... я сто раз проверяла - не дышит... мертва.
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03.03.2017
Почему-то и нечего сказать... Обойдусь без слов...без лишних слов... Только... Браво!
Спасибо! Но могли бы и высказаться!)))))
Супер, благослови вас Господь!!!!
Спасибо! От чистого сердца!
Великолепно!!!
Вы не представляете, как мне приятно! Спасибо большое-большое!!!))
Сильное стихотворение!!! Очень понравилось!!!